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Re: Advanced Critiques Questions
Okay, so i have reviewed before in this section. I then posted (after i reviewed) my work. Will it be deleted if i don't do another, or did the last ...
May 17, 2009 -
Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapters 1-5
Thank you for your kind review of Chapter 1. I knew Rena was not that well developed early, for originally, well, i had her kinda be a surprise. How does ...
May 17, 2009 -
Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapters 1-5
Ah yes, the abilities. I knew that i had trouble on that part, and i deleted a whole paragraph of unneeded explanation. its getting better, and thanks for mentioning it ...
May 13, 2009 -
Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapters 1-5
Thank you so much for your review ^-^! I like writing in a sort of passed tense, but if you thought that the events were happening now (the way you ...
May 12, 2009 -
Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapters 1-5
No problem. But i am a man without much patience, so if you are going to take a while please update me, as i had said, when you finish the ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapters 1-5
HI ^-^ Otaku here! I know it has been forever since i have posted anything from HSB, so i doubt if any of you remember it much. I have been ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: Help on begining of a prequel
Thank you so much ^^! That is exactaly what i needed! I am pumped. I have a ten or so page summary for my prequel that I plan to go ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: Help on begining of a prequel
i was on my DSi at midnight. I'm am actually impressed with what i wrote ^^ the prequel is to be about the trip 5 years ago. it is possible ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: Guess who is posting using his shiny new DSi!
wow, i've been out for far too long. Oh, do i hate editing...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Help on begining of a prequel
Okay, so i have a plan for a prequil to my current novel. i have a plan, but am missing one thing:where to begin. in short, the story starts on ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Guess who is posting using his shiny new DSi!
The DSi`s browser is opera based, son i guess it is opera. and i was wondering, you all (the high, in da know people) are talking about this "new" YWS. ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: THEM
Here is your review: there are a few points I want to get clear: a) Name brands are bad. You never know when the fads and stuff will be out. ...
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: Escape From Atlanta (Prologue)
Fights, death, and blood. All of these words have something in common and all depend on each other. If there's a fight there going to be death, and if there's ...
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: How has YWS changed you?
I didnt even review that many times and i got the insanely-nitpicky-writing-reviewer disorder! My writing has improved insanely since i joined thanks to all of your kind reviews, advice, and ...
Apr 24, 2009 -
Re: Guess who is posting using his shiny new DSi!
I was so happy when i got my new DSi that i killed the wireless on my router trying to get it online. Now, $80 later, i am in bed ...
Apr 24, 2009
