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  • Novel Workshop Re: Advanced Critiques Questions

    Okay, so i have reviewed before in this section. I then posted (after i reviewed) my work. Will it be deleted if i don't do another, or did the last ...

    May 17, 2009
  • Novel Workshop Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapters 1-5

    Thank you for your kind review of Chapter 1. I knew Rena was not that well developed early, for originally, well, i had her kinda be a surprise. How does ...

    May 17, 2009
  • Novel Workshop Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapters 1-5

    Ah yes, the abilities. I knew that i had trouble on that part, and i deleted a whole paragraph of unneeded explanation. its getting better, and thanks for mentioning it ...

    May 13, 2009
  • Novel Workshop Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapters 1-5

    Thank you so much for your review ^-^! I like writing in a sort of passed tense, but if you thought that the events were happening now (the way you ...

    May 12, 2009
  • Novel Workshop Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapters 1-5

    No problem. But i am a man without much patience, so if you are going to take a while please update me, as i had said, when you finish the ...

    May 10, 2009
  • Novel Workshop Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapters 1-5

    HI ^-^ Otaku here! I know it has been forever since i have posted anything from HSB, so i doubt if any of you remember it much. I have been ...

    May 9, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: Help on begining of a prequel

    Thank you so much ^^! That is exactaly what i needed! I am pumped. I have a ten or so page summary for my prequel that I plan to go ...

    Apr 30, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: Help on begining of a prequel

    i was on my DSi at midnight. I'm am actually impressed with what i wrote ^^ the prequel is to be about the trip 5 years ago. it is possible ...

    Apr 29, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Guess who is posting using his shiny new DSi!

    wow, i've been out for far too long. Oh, do i hate editing...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: Help on begining of a prequel

    Okay, so i have a plan for a prequil to my current novel. i have a plan, but am missing one thing:where to begin. in short, the story starts on ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Guess who is posting using his shiny new DSi!

    The DSi`s browser is opera based, son i guess it is opera. and i was wondering, you all (the high, in da know people) are talking about this "new" YWS. ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Novel Workshop Re: THEM

    Here is your review: there are a few points I want to get clear: a) Name brands are bad. You never know when the fads and stuff will be out. ...

    Apr 25, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Escape From Atlanta (Prologue)

    Fights, death, and blood. All of these words have something in common and all depend on each other. If there's a fight there going to be death, and if there's ...

    Apr 25, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: How has YWS changed you?

    I didnt even review that many times and i got the insanely-nitpicky-writing-reviewer disorder! My writing has improved insanely since i joined thanks to all of your kind reviews, advice, and ...

    Apr 24, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Guess who is posting using his shiny new DSi!

    I was so happy when i got my new DSi that i killed the wireless on my router trying to get it online. Now, $80 later, i am in bed ...

    Apr 24, 2009


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